My friend-since-college Ron Caplan recently published a book on a Cape Breton obituary poet, Andrew Dunphy, called "A Stone for Andrew Dunphy." It isn't until the last chapter that the reader realizes the "Stone" is the book itself--a gravestone made of deep scholarship and reverent study of this man who wrote elegies on request for cape residents. Ron's book has been in and on my mind since finishing it over a month ago. I wondered if the tradition of narrative rhyme about which he writes so eloquently had continuance of some sort in my/our time. Something in me knew it did but that it wasn't a literal kind that sought to preserve a tradition in neo-classical mimicry. I had to perform my own ancestry.com search based on complex, zigzagging reading. Not surprisingly, I found the bequeathal was far more lateral, oblique and transformed in order to endure long transport and possibly harsh transplant in urbanized American soil. That poem, I believe, is Paul Blackburn's "The Selection of Heaven," written in 1963 for the poet's grandparents--Hannah, 87, and John Henry, 88, Blackburn (who died March 23rd and April 16th, 1963)--and who otherwise would have gone, as Dunphy's subjects would have, unremarked and unsung.
Here is Section 16 written for John Henry, from this masterpiece of modern American poetry. Blackburn has become a constant companion, his writing acting as a seeing-eye dog for the streets and straits of my country. God bless him. Ron and I had beers with Paul when he came to read at Temple University around 1967. Remember, dear friend.
My love to all and my prayer for lives worthy of commentary like this.
16. w o r d s : should have been spoken at graveside
There are no true voices anymore, John
Henry, you knucklehead, you hard-
headed, stiff-backed, tough-minded old man, your
mouth is clenched tight for good
it is a solid line
Henry, you knucklehead, you hard-
headed, stiff-backed, tough-minded old man, your
from under your sharpened nose around your pointed chin, above
that
the strong, kind, (remembered), and finally closed eyes,
the dead tissues under the skull that were your brain
softened finally with your 88 years
the strong, kind, (remembered), and finally closed eyes,
the dead tissues under the skull that were your brain
softened finally with your 88 years
into a forgetfulness your children could
relate to, could pity, could and did
expiate themselves upon, so
accept their own lives
relate to, could pity, could and did
expiate themselves upon, so
for what they had become or grown to,
John, you knucklehead, you bonehead, in
the old photographs you are more often
scowling, when the others
are smiling bravely into the bright sun.
John, you knucklehead, you bonehead, in
the old photographs you are more often
are smiling bravely into the bright sun.
with everyone you loved and were proud
when your children fought you back with brain and spirit
and were hurt, of course you were hurt
by it, and loved them . You
had made them irrevocably yours you would have said God's
and that's not true, and your mouth is closed for good
upon the air of this world, your hands not
folded in eternity as that
cliche-ridden, pompous, minister
friend of yours who did you final service might
have said had he the gift of words, but
clenched, holding your heaven to you;
swollen farmer's hands that had been kinder than your mind was
clenched in eternity the rock of your mind
that could not crack and open but
still clenched dissolved under the rain of years
upon the air of this world, your hands not
friend of yours who did you final service might
have said had he the gift of words, but
clenched, holding your heaven to you;
swollen farmer's hands that had been kinder than your mind was
clenched in eternity the rock of your mind
that could not crack and open but
still clenched dissolved under the rain of years
the head still,
straight white hair still handsome . 4
generations gathered round a coffin yesterday to pay
what truly was respect and sometimes love, the
different qualities of flesh
from ruined to what
renews itself each day, and grows, John,
stood there and did you honor . Rocks
straight white hair still handsome . 4
generations gathered round a coffin yesterday to pay
what truly was respect and sometimes love, the
different qualities of flesh
stood there and did you honor . Rocks
wear away under the rain . Flesh is tough
the spirit
resilient . tougher than flesh . They
said you looked natural
and in their mouths it
was comforting cliché . The words
were truer than they knew, you still looked
stiff-backed, hard-headed,
but the spirit gone, that blur,
a peace
the spirit
resilient . tougher than flesh . They
said you looked natural
and in their mouths it
was comforting cliché . The words
were truer than they knew, you still looked
but the spirit gone, that blur,
a peace
E A R T H T O E A R T H
GOD,
be here at this graveside .
Not in the cut flowers the undertakers' men heaped up
but in the new forsythia, red maple
buds, magnolia, be
in the spring earth
will heap this grave, grow new grass over it,
golden green of willow starting fresh . be
in the spring earth with John,
your faithful servant,
where he will lie
next to Hannah as he did in life, her
eternal lover . Lock them
forever into this hillside
facing the Acushnet gulls settle on,
wheel over crying, hear them in the
distance .
be here at this graveside .
Not in the cut flowers the undertakers' men heaped up
but in the new forsythia, red maple
in the spring earth
will heap this grave, grow new grass over it,
golden green of willow starting fresh . be
in the spring earth with John,
your faithful servant,
where he will lie
next to Hannah as he did in life, her
facing the Acushnet gulls settle on,
wheel over crying, hear them in the
distance .
Smoke rises
from between my forefinger
and middlefinger . Wind on this
Cold spring hillside sweeps it off
barely visible in the sunlight
from between my forefinger
and middlefinger . Wind on this
Cold spring hillside sweeps it off
barely visible in the sunlight
the ashes
fall upon new grass .
fall upon new grass .
A S H E S TO A S H E S
John,
forgive the carpet of phoney grass
too dark for the season
the undertakers spread beneath your
coffin for this moment . We have
seen you to this hillside, let it be
enough . Forgive
the Reverend Doctor his recitation
of 2 Edgar Guest poems yesterday, I
figured I could stand it if you could . The rain
of dirt and pebbles will be real enough .
fresh clods set in
after you have settled . Rain
fructifies,
but will wear away .
ROCK
The committing ceremony had the
dignity of its own
words, yesterday,
despite the use of flowers with their snapped-off heads
instead of fistfuls of earth . EARTH .
When the diggers end the job, let
the first 3 shovelsful of spring earth
be my shovelsful, let it be enough .
forgive the carpet of phoney grass
the undertakers spread beneath your
coffin for this moment . We have
seen you to this hillside, let it be
enough . Forgive
the Reverend Doctor his recitation
of 2 Edgar Guest poems yesterday, I
figured I could stand it if you could . The rain
of dirt and pebbles will be real enough .
The committing ceremony had the
dignity of its own
despite the use of flowers with their snapped-off heads
instead of fistfuls of earth . EARTH .
When the diggers end the job, let
the first 3 shovelsful of spring earth
be my shovelsful, let it be enough .
D U S T TO D U S T
have not willed the occasion for these words
which cry themselves like hunting gulls
my mouth flapping open . GOD,
welcome your servant John Henry
into whatever Paradise he thought existed,
offer him
the best accomodation that you have for such a
Let there be soft
where he is, let him hear gulls cry
above the
bridge,
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